04-23-2014, 10:54 AM
Ok, updated document...
Packgoat.Bans.pdf (Size: 73.87 KB / Downloads: 8)
I fixed all the little details ya'll pointed out, fixed some typos, and reworded a couple of things. I also decided not to mention any specific scientific studies because I want this to be a very accessible read, and naming studies (like using acronyms) makes it sound like jargon. I decided to get even less specific instead. If people are interested, they'll do the research.
Let me know if there's anything further to fix before I print these out!
Packgoat.Bans.pdf (Size: 73.87 KB / Downloads: 8)
I fixed all the little details ya'll pointed out, fixed some typos, and reworded a couple of things. I also decided not to mention any specific scientific studies because I want this to be a very accessible read, and naming studies (like using acronyms) makes it sound like jargon. I decided to get even less specific instead. If people are interested, they'll do the research.
Let me know if there's anything further to fix before I print these out!